#1
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Me and my band spent today and yesterday at a local studio recording our very first demo. We eventually finished two and a half songs, but have put of two on them on our Myspace.

The singing is a bit off in the first one (Sinking Ship), did not have time to make it better, but besides that I reckon it's decent enough. I especially liked how the second one, Release The Hounds, turned out.

Considering it's our first demo and first time recording any original material, I'm pretty satisfied.

Music and lyrics for both songs are written by myself. I play all guitar parts, and sing backing vocals.

Any thoughts or constructive criticism welcome!

-DW
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#2
Thats actually really good. But its kinda weird how the piano is like 2x louder than the guitar. Only listened to the first song though.
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#4
Wow, that's pretty good. I loved the into for Sinking Ship. My only real fuss is yeah, the vocals need a bit of refining, but the voice itself is good. My other, uh... "unreal" fuss is that I'm not a huge fan of the guitar tone, but that's a nitpick. Overall, me like.

BTW, it's telling me Release the Hounds is unavailable, and yet I can clearly see a play count. What nonsense is this?
#5
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Wow, that's pretty good. I loved the into for Sinking Ship. My only real fuss is yeah, the vocals need a bit of refining, but the voice itself is good. My other, uh... "unreal" fuss is that I'm not a huge fan of the guitar tone, but that's a nitpick. Overall, me like.

BTW, it's telling me Release the Hounds is unavailable, and yet I can clearly see a play count. What nonsense is this?


Yeah, it's been doing that a bit. Try reloading the page, it usually works.

Glad you liked it, our next demo is sure to be better! And the guitar tone for Sinking Ship became perhaps a bit too metallic now in retrospect, but it is much better in Release The Hounds.

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