#1
This is a song I wrote about a girl (WHOA! CRAZZZZY CONCEPT! :P) and how I try and try in vain to win her approval and affection.

It was recorded on a headset mic using Sound Recorder on windows. Pretty minimalist, I know...but that's really all I have right now to record onto my computer. The effects are simply recorded rain (ambient) then layered with acoustic harmonics until the actual song starts.

C4C as always. Much obliged!

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/ApolloTSI/

EDIT: hahaha, my apologies...I pasted the URL wrong before. It's fixed now. Enjoy!
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Last edited by ApolloTSI at Nov 3, 2008,
#2
I like it. I would cut some of the intro, though and try not to be off key so much in your singing. I think it's okay to be off key sometimes, but you did it a lot, so like I said, I would fix that. The guitar work is very pretty!
#3
thanks alex, i appreciate the feedback. which parts was i off-key? i was only "trying" during the sliding part from G to A. ahh and i just heard a part right before i went into the "ill be waiting for you" part. do you have a link for a crit?
-Epi LP Ultra
-Mashall MG100HDFX half-stack
-Tama Imperialstar
-Epi "Hater-Slayer"
-Fender Ultimate Chorus
-Fender US Strat
-'51 Fender Pro-Amp Model 5A5 TV Front (sexy beast)
-Wechter Pathfinder A/E
-Washburn D-10SB