#1
Hey, I just started using tuxguitar and have been trying to write some music for a new band I'm starting. I only play bass, so its a little hard to write guitar parts. This piece is pretty necrophagist/meshuggah inspired. One part is definitely impossible to play on drums, Don't crit to harsh!

This song is a work in progress, yet to be finished, and is just a rough and basic idea of what I want my music to sound like. enjoy!
Attachments:
tech1.zip
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#2
I agree, I think you have some humanely impossible parts in there.

I definately heard the Meshuggah influence. As well as the Necrophagist.

The outro was definately unique. Didn't sound so great in Guitar Pro, but imagining it live, I think it would sound pretty cool.

Liked the tremelo picking section that start from bar 24.

Yeah crazy bass sweeping XD.

Good place to start, I think you're on a good track especially if this just early example.
#3
Thanks for the feedback man,

the tremelo picking section is actually the impossible drum section!

do you have anything that needs a crit?
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#4
I like the song a lot. The sweeping parts... my god lol


The only thing that I think you should work on is the drumming for the song. I would of loved to see more technical work there.