#1
So yeah this is my first song, would like some critisicm/editing if it needs it.


She said she never lost faith in you
I find this hard to believe
These mistakes you keep making
Would have me on my knees

Why does she stay with you
When you do this to her
She must cry herself to sleep at night
Thinking about what you’ve done.

Whatever you do
whatever you say
Wont make me forgive you
My mind has been made

You said you two would work this out
That you could handle it
Seeing your track record
doesn’t fill me with confidence

I cant stand people like you
Who think they can do whatever
There’s a special place for you
Where you will rot forever

Why does she stay with you
When you do this to her
She must cry herself to sleep at night
Thinking about what you’ve done.

Whatever you do
whatever you say
Wont make me forgive you
My mind has been made
#3
Thanks for the fast reply ^^ Does it sound to much like another song? or is it fine? =\
#4
No, not like a couple other songs; this is original. I mean it actually reminds me of a couple.
#5
this is pretty good =]

She said she never lost faith in you
I find this hard to believe
These mistakes you keep making
Would have me on my knees

I really like this stanza