#1
I wrote this poem about english. btw, ASA=Detention in our school.

I sit in english


Reading a book


About poor people


and how they look


Some guy's gonna live in a yurt


with a wife of whom he's hurt.


I sit in english


while my mind fizzes


all we do is read and take quizzes.


I sit in english,


it's such a bore.


I just want to walk right out the door.


Oh look, he sent me out to the hall.


Trying to trip me but I wont fall.


I sit in the hall.


A disciplinary measure.


Doesn't affect me at all.


All I do is go Lawl.


I sit in the hall


Handed a ASA


Go home and continue on with my day.
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#2
I think this is fantastic. The cynicism and sarcasm (if that was your aim) is glorious. A perfect look into school teaching and the bollocks they sometimes profess to display.
#3
ur so rite.
There's only one thing we can do to thwart the plot of these albino shape-shifting lizard BITCHES!
#4
ah, irony is a beautiful thing. I enjoyed it. Childish, but what do i care? It made me smile.
#5
Thanks. It's exactly what I was aiming for. I wrote it during my english class, which is hell =/. Based on true events. Thanks guys!
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#6
childish, yet the irony is amusing.

if the childishness was purposeful, good job. if not, keep going.