So here is my new song, i've had this for a long time but only now i was able to finish it.

Drums and bass are not so well made so please concentrate on the guitars
There are also lyrics but they are not 100% complete.
So give me a review of this song and i will be happy to crit your song
Dark World.zip
Last edited by Wesku2 at Nov 4, 2008,
First Riff Good
Intro Solo Need more work
next Riff nothing special
Very Good Interlude
Good Solo

Edit the Chorus, i don't liked it very much

Chuck Schuldiner 1967-2001
Ronnie James Padavona 1942-2010
Darrell Lance Abbott 1966-2004
Jon Nödtveidt 1975-2006
Per Yngve Ohlin 1969-1991
Øystein Aarseth 1968-1993
Joe Ptaceck 1973-2010
Ace Börje Thomas Forsberg 1966-2004
this sounds like simon blackwings thrash metal 2?split work?
very nice,same as simons i will say it sounds like off an album (good)

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