#1
So here is my new song, i've had this for a long time but only now i was able to finish it.

Drums and bass are not so well made so please concentrate on the guitars
There are also lyrics but they are not 100% complete.
So give me a review of this song and i will be happy to crit your song
Attachments:
Dark World.zip
Last edited by Wesku2 at Nov 4, 2008,
#2
First Riff Good
Intro Solo Need more work
next Riff nothing special
Very Good Interlude
Good Solo

Edit the Chorus, i don't liked it very much

8-/10
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#3
this sounds like simon blackwings thrash metal 2?split work?
very nice,same as simons i will say it sounds like off an album (good)

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