#1
This song is my latest song that I've recorded

It's called "Bass"
(The name Temporary chosen mainly cause i started the song off with the bass line)

please tell me what you think

thanks

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http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Mikeboss/music/all/play453155

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#2
VERY nice.

It feels like a lot of the same thing though. Either add more variety, or vocals.

I also don't really hear a lot of muse in it.

Still, very nice though.
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#3
personally it reminded me of supermassive blackhole but maybe that's just me
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#4
Showing some originality by opening with that little bass riff instead of the typical guitar and drums that usually is the case. I'm interested in hearing what kind of vocal melody/parts you'll be putting over this. I definitely hear a strong Offspring influence; I like the tritone (?) you threw in there as well, just enough to get your attention without going overboard. Good job.

Feel free to crit a couple of demos/ideas that my bandmates weren't interested in.

1MM
#5
A little generic sounding on guitars (of course that's kinda hard not to do nowadays), but you've got potential there. The bassline is really good. Gives the song a nice feel. Like 1MM said, definately some Offspring influence. I think you could make some really killer vocal parts with this song. Keep it up, this has some potential.

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