Made in Fruity Loops 7, I use a riff kind of like the 1 in No quarter by led zeppelin, but everything else is original. Not a cover. Lemme know what you think,

it's in my profile.

I have no clue what's up with my browser, but I tried listening to your track twice, and each time my browser froze, the music played but the embedded flashplayer and my browser just remained static, so I can't give a second-by-second critique, but, I really liked the arpeggiated chords, but I wasn't a _huge_ fan of the keyboard tone, that's just my opinion though. Sorry, I'd give a more expansive critique if my browser wasn't acting up. Can you please check out my recording? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=17188953#post17188953