#1
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/TenaciousLSD/music/all/play453605

it's named dawn after my sister in law cause it's a bitch to play

c4c any crit appreciated thank you

edit: it was her idea btw i'm not being a dick i thought it was funny
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Last edited by TenaciousLSD at Nov 4, 2008,
#2
Great user name BTW.

Definitely heavy and I like it that have you diverse sections which you managed to successfully blend together. That, in my book, does not only make it heavy but has a nod towards a progressive feel as well.

The change of pace (I'm guessing it would be chorus) is a nice touch with the short harmony guitar lick as is the harmony guitar part at the end.

For this genre of music you definitely need to have the drums a bit more to the forefront to give it that aggressive edge and drive that match your guitar sound and feel. The final solo shows some nice double-picking cleanly executed; well done, keep up the good work.

Feel free to crit a couple of demos/ideas I submitted to my bandmates that they weren't too interested in.

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#3
Hey man just took a listen too your track, and i like it alot, i think the main hook lead line thing has alot of potential, it would have been nice to hear some vocals over this aswell. loving the harmonies+ the octave thing at the end. altogether nice composing, quite good mix kept me interested. well done!!

could you crit mine please??

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=992129
#4
thanks for the crit's guys. i have posted back
Don't you try and ask me your expiration date
Plans that forgot me 99 times
you'll be the one who opens the gate.

- Cedric Bixler Zavala

Founder of the UG RHPS fanclub....

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