#1
Ok so, normally this isnt the kind of lyrics that i would write but the words kind of just popped into my head. I probably wont be using these lyrics, i just wanted to share them and tell me what you think.

Its only like a verse or chorus:

Everywhere i go
Everything i see
Your face is always there
Staring back at me

I guess i may be wrong
But i know what i saw
Im being haunted by your face
Your face in the fog
Someone's standing on my chest...
#2
good, simple, effective. but i wouldnt use both of them. repitition of "your face" will end up seeming like you are, to use an old phrase, beating a dead horse.

personally, i prefer the first one. develop maybe?