#1
any feedback would be greatly appriciated! this my second non metal or punk song

i have see every shade of grey
througout my livf i have felt the pain
from the the passing of those who are close to me
to the little things that noone can see
i still keep my head up i hold it high
just like i will til the end of time

i keep my emotions bottled up inside
all because of my selfish pride
if i shed a tear it makes me feel weak
id rather take the pain or id rather bleed

days they come and days they go
only in time memories become ghosts
when you think that their gone for good
the come back to haunt like you hoped they never would
still i hold my head up i hold it high
just like i will til the day i die

and when they chunk me into the grave
the pain will die with me on that day
the burden i carry heavy on my back
will go down with me and slowly fade to black

and when they chunk me into the grave
the pain will die with me on that day
the burden i carry heavy on my back
will go down with me and slowly fade to black

i keep my emotions bottled up inside
all because of my selfish pride
if i shed a tear it makes me feel weak
id rather take the pain or id rather bleed

i have see every shade of grey
througout my livf i have felt the pain
days they come and days they go
only in time memories become ghosts

so when they chunk me into the grave
the pain will die with me on that day
the burden i carry heavy on my back
will go down with me and slowly fade to black