#1
well this is my first attempt at lyrics so be nice. i know it needs a lot of help but i thought i'd give it some exposure anyway. no title yet.

stare at the ceiling
half covered in bed
nights are pretty chilly
still you break into sweat

that generic acoustic music
creepily pleasant tonight

but i...
I'm sure this has to be right
and i still soar and fly while I'm strapped to your spiraling kite
your spiraling kite


i promise ill try to always be there
i promise ill laugh as you go (away)
ill be the sidelined mannequin you want now
and never want anything more

but i...
know that we'll never be right
i...
don't know what you feel
when you
gaze at the sky at your kite


cut loose before it'd crash in the night
#2
hey, just a quick warning, check the rules for naming posts. Delete this and post it properly and I'll crit it.
#3
^Report it next time.

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