#1
Hey, this is one of my new songs... The Problem is, I am from switzerland and my english isn't very good... could you help me to correct this text, please??

thanks for help

Vers.1
Smoke cigars and drink beer
Deal with the devil with no fear

Some people will think you’re confused
Sometime you will win and you will lose

In this business it goes up and down
So get up if you fall on the ground

Bridge
Spend your life and spend your soul
For sex and drugs and rock’n’roll

Ref
Be ready for good times
Ready for bad times
Be ready, ready… for everything

Vers.2
Drive a big old Cadillac car
And drink single malt whisky on the premium bar

You have to praise the gods of rock’n’roll
And always carry on, if you want to reach the goal
#2
the rhymes, and the song itself, was cheesy and cliche, sorry, dont like it.

what do you mean correct?
#3
are these your own lyrics? They seem very good for a Swiss person with poor English!
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#4
"Sometimes you will win" is the only error I see, but there is nothing wrong with the lyrics, I have seen far poorer ones than these. Hope this is helpful to you. (My wife is Swiss by the way!)
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