#1
Hey all i just started on this piece not to long ago i was wondering if you think i'm headed in the right track or scrap it.
oh yeah its metalcore.
Attachments:
NewWip.zip
Break.NoBreak Nov. 10th.zip
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7321
Ibanez RG6003FM
Ibanez SA160
Jackson Slatxmg3-7
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Rivera Knucklehead TRE
Fryette Sig: X
Randall RM4 /w Modded modules
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
Peavey 4x12(K85s)
Last edited by kylendm at Nov 10, 2008,
#3
thats pretty freaking sweet, and to the guy above, i doubt the songs going to just end on that.
Whats the longest word?


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/killme
#4
It's all really good except for the breakdown, I reckon scrap that part and try for some new ideas, but the rest I quite enjoyed.
#5
Update! Alright i pretty much doubled the length of the song. I still kept the breakdown cause my friends seem to like it but just in case i added one with out it =). Update is the Nov. 10th one. Its got both versions in it.

Its Still Not Done Yet!
Just saying cause i still feel the song doesn't flow nicely at all.
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7321
Ibanez RG6003FM
Ibanez SA160
Jackson Slatxmg3-7
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Rivera Knucklehead TRE
Fryette Sig: X
Randall RM4 /w Modded modules
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
Peavey 4x12(K85s)
Last edited by kylendm at Nov 10, 2008,
#6
Could i please get some input? =/
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7321
Ibanez RG6003FM
Ibanez SA160
Jackson Slatxmg3-7
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Rivera Knucklehead TRE
Fryette Sig: X
Randall RM4 /w Modded modules
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
Peavey 4x12(K85s)