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I'm going to bed now, and I'm gonna get up in the morning and crit Garret, I really am. And if anyone crit's this, I'll crit some of their stuff too.

Thatisall.

Edit: that is not all.

Lyrics: http://ealtdharkon.deviantart.com/art/Chosen-102963030
Attachments:
Chosen.zip
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What a weird ****ing guy.


Edit: In the process of listen ing toy our song TS>


I thought that the song was great. For some reason I'm not a fan of the drumming in riff 1. I really didn't like the crash symbols in the riff. Riff 3 kinda reminded me of Cannbal Corpse's - Hammer Smashed Face. Overall, I liked the song.
Last edited by Graveworm at Nov 5, 2008,
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Quote by Graveworm



What a weird ****ing guy.



There's a story behind it, I assure you.

I'll probably have the drums redone at some point, by a drummer =)
...I listened to Hammer Smashed Face just after writing this, and was like "oops", but I'm keeping that riff, they can take it as a compliment.

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you should be comended for your contribution to music history


Thankyou. What?
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Lol riff 3 reminds me the chorus of hammer smashed face by cannibal corpse
Riff 2 is bad
Acoustic part is good, cut the distortion part
Pornogrind LoL
Cannibal Corpse-ish

Crit Mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=975948
R.I.P.
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#9
I like it, very technical. The first riff was good but got repetative after a while. The switching from riff to riff was abrupt, but it's tech death, amirite? Pornogrind! Lol, it didn't really remind me of it, but i guess i don't listen to it that much... In the end, I liked it. RIFF III FTW!!!

C4C?
http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=993726
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Banned because.. that was brilliant, champayne


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