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Calibre Unknown

Tales from the east
Patient with the ability to tease
Constant with consummate ease
I’ve forgotten how to tell you
I feel the same, as I always do

Forced to the west
Calibre unknown; but sought to impress
Vigilant, aware of the test
I’ve forgotten how to tell you
I feel the same, as I always do

Come now
I felt you as I do
Tell you as I do
Yet something falters

Brazen from the deep,
Deep south, I see
A monotonous killing spree
I remembered to tell you
I feel the same as you always do

Rasping, from the cold,
Cold north, re-torn
Illegitimate design; unborn
I remembered to tell you
I feel the same as you tend to

The way you pretend to
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