It's ok, but work more on the third riff
Change the solo: it's boring
Good for being your 2nd song
Work more on the tempo


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pretty sweet. reminds of metalica a lot, sort of the feel really. the solo is kind of generic. the interlude is pretty sweet, that's also metalica-ish.

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The riffs are too Generic...too metallica-ish.

Why don't you rip off Flotsam&Jetsam instead?

The bridge doesn't fit with the song
otther than that it's good for a 2nd song.....6.5/10