#3
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Clean it up, it needs a better tone. The playing was nice, except in spots the notes sounded a little off. Great overall though.

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you need a lot of practice man! and seems you`re out of tune also...
#4
really? Everyone I've shown said it was fine.... I knew I was outa tune though, after listening to the video. What should I work on?
meh
#5
I don't like your tone, and at 42 seconds you hit a wrong note that sounds pretty bad.
I think it all sounds a bit too choppy, but that might be because your guitar tone doesn't really have any dynamics.

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#6
Quote by get ta led out!
really? Everyone I've shown said it was fine.... I knew I was outa tune though, after listening to the video. What should I work on?


well first, tune your guitar because even if you hit the note properly it sounds out of tune so i really cant say did you played it right.