#1
Broken
you left me hopin'
Hopin'
eyes are open
Closing
Last words were spoken
Leading me to the place where
hearts are broken, again

Over and over again...
over and over again...
over and over again...

Floatin'
on thin air
but i was shot down
from the stratoshpere
Her arrows
pierced my skin
Sent me fallin'
no place left to begin, again

Over and over again...
over and over again...
over and over again...

I'd do anything
anything you'd say
If you told me to jump
I'd jump right away

again...

Over and over again...
over and over again...
over and over again.......
#3
Would work well rapped.
I like the "Hopin'", "Broken", "Closing", etc.
Reminded me of a hardcore song or something, and those words should be gang-vocals.
Aheh.
Just my two-cents. :$
Gore AND Core; unite!