#1
Okay, I have posted this before, But I had not yet read the rules... Now that I understand the rules, I will post this:

A Pact With the Devil

It was a pact with the devil – signed in puffs of smoke,
emitted from the devil’s gift to me – a cigarette.
The cigarette envelopes you in a cloud of gray smoke.
You walk into this grey void, unaware of what lies ahead.
It sucks out all of your happiness, your youth, your strength.
And once your life is beyond repair,
The grey smoke will frigidly touch your ailing excuse for a body,
As your life flashes before your eyes.
Unlike many people, I walked into that unending void,
And lived to tell about it.
As I started walking into this cloud of nothing, unsure of what would happen, I decided to look back.
And as I turned, I was suddenly filled with newfound hope.
For I saw a shimmer of light.
It was not much, but in such a caliginous surrounding,
It was as clear as a full moon in the nighttime sky.
So I ran back to this shimmer of light.
And as the light became clearer and my margin of view wider,
I realized that my eyes had been obscured by the devil’s trickery.
I then threw the cigarette as far away as possible,
And lived a happy, fulfilling life.

P.S. Be kind, I'm new to the whole poem-writing thing.
Gear:

St. Blues Bluesmaster IV
Vox AC4- ah-mazing lil amp
Roland Micro Cube- 1st amp... pretty crappy
a whole lotta picks

Am I the only one who has WON
THE GAME?

#2
Please understand the rules, specifically those on thread titling.
There's only one thing we can do to thwart the plot of these albino shape-shifting lizard BITCHES!
#4
It seems like no-one thought it was any good. Any constructive criticisms would be a nice early birthday present to me =)
Gear:

St. Blues Bluesmaster IV
Vox AC4- ah-mazing lil amp
Roland Micro Cube- 1st amp... pretty crappy
a whole lotta picks

Am I the only one who has WON
THE GAME?