#1
Hey! I wanna see what you guys think of this, not yet completed metal song.
Everything is recorded at my home at my computer.

The song is in my profile and is called "Right between your eyes"
#3
nice mixing and chord changes, i love that chunky riff at about 40seconds in. the tone on your guitar is real fat aswell. will be great with some vocals in there. i think it would sound good with a lead guitar melody line over one or two of the changes, just to break it up a bit... real potential in this... nice work!!

crit mine?https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=992129
#5
Not bad man. Although I think I like "Black Butterfly" better. That song was rocking. All of them are very nice though.