#1
new song, like Assassin by Muse. Its wird and the rhyming imn the verse is AABBA,
chorus is AAB. Thanks for comments.

Destroy Democracy

Anarchy, monarchy
over rule democracy
its abolished
its demolished
lets destroy democracy

lose control,
destroy its hold
on us

mutated through the years
by all of its fears
there it goes
with its hoes
its lost all its peers

lose control
destroy its hold
on us
ohhh
on us
woooahhh
Myspace.

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it wasn't 7 days, it was 5.

and you call yourself the son of catholics

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I would keep it on my mantel piece and tell my grandchildren about the day I tried to overthrow the human race with my race of tree-men.
#2
everything was "ok" the last stanza was not good at all try to change that, it not even near enough like descriptive or ya know what i meen? it just doesn't fit, crit mine? its on front page
#3
The only worthwhile political music involves frothy emotional appeal. This is just dumb.

I've been a punk with a 1 foot tall mohawk spraypainted red, screaming lyrics about my shitty life and the shitty world.

There are cooler ways of being unproductive.

But, if your goal is to be a member of that scene, I would recommend actually knowing what youre singing about.

-Jake

Oh and if you care to, https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=994802