I'm not really good at this whole songwriting malarky

but i gave it a go anyway.

i tried to write a pop song

so please crit it as a pop song

and not a technical kinda song

yeah it's full of cliche's

but its a pop song


c4c applies

Edit: I wrote this song cause all i write is Death Metal, and needed a change of scenery
Last edited by jdmusicuk at Nov 9, 2008,
I rather enjoyed that. The vocal melody was a little boring, but the synth in the background gave it a nice touch.