#1
My band recorded one song. We finished it for a few months already but it had no solos in it. So I added my solo today.

As the recording of the song and the solo are months apart, I need to know if they are cohesive and how could I make it better. We are thinking of making a demo to sumit it to recording studios here in Thailand. The song btw is in Thai, so no bashing on the language. Just tune into the universal language of music.

My song is in my profile.

Here's the link:

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/gflip69/music/all/play457678

Thanks in advance!
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#2
Wow, i was expecting shit when you said it was your first song, but its pretty cool. Definitely a Incubus sort of vibe (after seeing your icon), but its very different, little more poppy. The vocal are pretty good, i cant understand what he is saying, is it in a different language? The solo needs to be turned down just a tad, it does sound like an overdub. I think it sounds pretty natural though, i like the solo.

your music reminds me a bit of my own, check it out:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=997028
#3
wow that sounds amazing! i kinda want to hear it in english but its great!
i like the calm feeling, and the voice is pretty good too!
they verses and the chorus are really catchy! and the guitar solo fits in perfectly! if you take it up an octave higher in some parts its like inspirational, but its a good song, i love it!

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=996331
(both songs if you want)
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#4
I like it so far. Really chill...cool melodies. And the distortion is a nice touch. The vocals arnt really my bag, but thats minor. They sound fine, just not my preferred style.

Heading into the chorus, my only complaint is that its a little repetitive. The 2-chord chorus is kinda of boring. But it sounds good. Great arrangement. I like the clean guitar accents. Great solo btw, i like it. Reminds me of the 90's :P

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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=17072073#post17072073
#5
Thanks very much!!! I appreciate the comments and suggestion. The language used is thai. Well anyway, I'm going to listen to your songs and crit for ya.
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Last edited by gflip69 at Nov 11, 2008,
#6
the only thing that i would comment on is a little better fills maybe from the drums, the bass part fits like a glove but there are just some flat dead parts. it doesnt have to be loud and crashy it could be settle but thats just me. good work though
#7
more symbols! little less high hats, just for a fill. not loud but make it have that roll effect, that would be nice.