#1
This is a very upbeat ska punk song. It has a very fast flow of the lyrics so keep that in mind when your reading it. Leave me link to one of yours. peace...

Verse:
In this society you gotta have a label
Branded, classified, like cattle in a stable
The older generation's manipulating our minds
And the youth of today are like clay in their hands

Chorus:
Unity dangles on a string, violence is on the rise
And we just stand around like nothing's wrong
We watch as humanity crumbles into dust
So blind... to our own destruction

Verse:
Ideals and religous beliefs passed down for generations
Parents teaching us what was taught to them
It's time to question and it's time to open our eyes
It's time to expose this twisted society's lies

Chorus:
Untiy dangles on a string, violence is on the rise
And we just stand around like nothing's wrong
We watch as humanity crumbles into dust
So blind... to our own destruction

Verse:
We are this world's last chance to end the chaos
And what do we do? we waste our lives with drugs, sex, and money
Fighting with each other just to get our thrills
Isn't their enough violence in this world?

Chorus:
Unity Dangles on a string, violence is on the rise
And we just stand around like nothing's wong
We watch as humanity crumbles into dust
So blind... to our own destruction

Verse:
We are all human and have the ability to reason
Put down your guns and throw away your hate
Kill each other 'til the end of time or stand together in peace
We choose our own fate
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Last edited by Descendent-182 at Nov 10, 2008,
#2
Violence is on the rise - And we just stand around as it's not of that big size =D i think, if it is a very straight-forward song then you need some more rhymes, especially in the chorus!
like: we watch as humanity crumbles into dust - so blind, to our destruction we run fast xD
yeah, but i like the idea...
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#3
Quote by Descendent-182
This is a very upbeat ska punk song. It has a very fast flow of the lyrics so keep that in mind when your reading it. Leave me link to one of yours. peace...

Verse:
In this society you gotta have a label
Branded, classified, like cattle in a stable
The older generation's manipulating our minds
And the youth of today are like clay in their hands Ooh very good metaphor, I'm assuming a metaphor for how propaganda and corporate society is controlling, or trying to control, everyone.

Chorus:
Unity dangles on a string
Violence is on the rise
And we just stand around like nothing's wrong
We watch as humanity crumbles into dust
So blind... to our own destruction Very true about USA, no one cares anymore, it's just, heh.

Verse:
Ideals and religous beliefs passed down for generations
Parents teaching us what was taught to them...all i got for now any ideas?


Very good, very eye-opening.
Last verse, next line(s) should mention something about drugs, or something.

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