#2
I liked the second solo, I hope that was you.
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#3
errr no, lol.

mine was the first
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#4
First of all, get your singer to enunciate! I couldn't understand more than five or six words he said. Guitar tone and playing is pretty good. I see you don't have a bassist but at least one of you guys should record a bass prt for your song. It would tie everything together, right now its missing something and I wouldn't be surprised if that something was a bass line.

Cool solos, first and second. I'm glad you didn't get shreddy, that would've sounded weird with this song.

You're site needs a makeover though. Seriously I don't care what angle you're going for but bright yellow is welcoming to no one.

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#5
Thanks for the critique johnny, .
lol I'll say it to the singer, hes improving all the time like. Thanks for the guitar tone compliments also. there is actually bass on the song, fender jazzmaster lying around (lol) but it's a bit low in the mix so we'll probably change it around. The drum was a drum machine also, the drummer couldnt bring his gear up.

The solo approving is also welcome, i was going to throw in sweeping and lots of shredding but I decided to restrain myself and kept it simple.

I'll listen to your recording later, in college atm.

Like i said thanks for all the critique and advice
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#7
The music is okay. After the intro part it got better. The arrangement is good. The dynamics of the song could be improved. The solo fits the song. Nice cohesion. The downside is the voice of the singer. It could be improved. I don't know if my speakers are crap or is there no bass in your demo.

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