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i wrote this song about my nana's town a couple days ago, and i wanna find out if its any good...

i believe what wireman says
that whats not alive may be better off dead
and when it comes to the past we all stack the deck
maybe its time that i stop being me
im a tired old lie of apathy
and lets no pretend that the worlds all its cracked up to be
this whole town is a tired excuse
full of fast food joints and protistutes
they all ask me to join but im not sure im ready to

ive walked this line amillion times and its not sunny here anymore
nad my boss says he aint got no legs and manasotas lost its charm
my windows open every night cuz it gets pretty hot
but i think it might get cold out tonight

the roundabout has got to go
and for 10 years now we aint seen no snow
we dont get too much of that here outside of the moving picture shows
the rednecks have their hemis and their tree hamocks
and the trust fund kids have thier coke habits
and the only difference between a drag and a dairy queen is the dick
the big pictures isnt really relevant her
theyre paving over everything that i hold dear
georges place has burned down 3 times since last year

ive walked this line amillion times and its not sunny here anymore
nad my boss says he aint got no legs and manasotas lost its charm
my windows open every night cuz it gets pretty hot
but i think it might get cold out tonight


thanks for any feedback