#1
Hey everyone! So this is my newest. My friend and I were jammin and i was playin around with the palm muted 16th note riff that starts in bar 5. I decided after we were done to tab it (mainly just so i could remember it) and got inspired to create a song with it!

I dont really know what genre this is, per se. Metal really isn't my thing but i figured this was as close to it as you can get. It's got a little of everything in it, but i dont think i can really call it experimental. Idk, youll just have to listen, right?

Solo 2 isnt really a solo, i guess. It's just a break in the singing and the instruments do all the work. I just wanted to mark it as something, so "solo 2" will work.

EDIT: Added a new attachment at the end of this thread with updated song, midi, and gp4 for all you complainers haha.

As with all of my works, C4C.
Feel free to bash the hell out of me if need be..i dont ever really write in this vein, so it's kinda new to me. If it sucks, just tell me.
Attachments:
red eye reverie.zip
-Epi LP Ultra
-Mashall MG100HDFX half-stack
-Tama Imperialstar
-Epi "Hater-Slayer"
-Fender Ultimate Chorus
-Fender US Strat
-'51 Fender Pro-Amp Model 5A5 TV Front (sexy beast)
-Wechter Pathfinder A/E
-Washburn D-10SB
Last edited by ApolloTSI at Nov 29, 2008,
#2
bar 2 is dissonant
Good riffs
fix the dissonances
Good solo

PS. Post Thrash= Groove Metal

7+/10

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=995278
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#3
Wow. Very, very good.

I love the progressions you used, very... I don't know how to put it, but they sort of reminded me of Opeth.

The solos were really good. Nothing really stood out in a bad way (though, in a good way, alot of it stuck out :P)

You maintained an excellent flow throughout the piece too, just like in your other piece.

And yes, I agree with you. It does sound like a breakdown :P
#4
GP4 file plz
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#5
ill export one and a midi file when i get home from work today. thanks for the interest.
-Epi LP Ultra
-Mashall MG100HDFX half-stack
-Tama Imperialstar
-Epi "Hater-Slayer"
-Fender Ultimate Chorus
-Fender US Strat
-'51 Fender Pro-Amp Model 5A5 TV Front (sexy beast)
-Wechter Pathfinder A/E
-Washburn D-10SB
#6
heres the updated song (minor fixes) with GP4, GP5, and midi. Thanks!
Attachments:
red eye reverie (updated).zip
-Epi LP Ultra
-Mashall MG100HDFX half-stack
-Tama Imperialstar
-Epi "Hater-Slayer"
-Fender Ultimate Chorus
-Fender US Strat
-'51 Fender Pro-Amp Model 5A5 TV Front (sexy beast)
-Wechter Pathfinder A/E
-Washburn D-10SB