#1
Weighed by Chains
Copyright© 2008 CGB


Yeh!

{Verse 1}
Weighed down by chains,
Left here to decay,
Resting in the sun,
Sandpaper tongue.

[Chorus]
Fuel for my life’s desire,
Throw it unto my fire,
Light up the darkest corners,
And deepest pits of my mind

{Verse 2}
This life I crave,
Boiling lava rain,
Piercing through my being,
Dried eyes can’t see.

[Chorus]

(Bridge)
Yeh, I can’t see,
Nor can I breathe,
Eyes dry as bone,
Lungs filled with stone,
Chained and weighed down,
Skin’s turning brown.

[Chorus]

{Verse 3}
Enter my grave,
Moved against the grain,
Guess I earned my fate,
Now it’s too late.

(Bridge)

[Chorus]

Any and all crit is appreciated.
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#2
Eh. Not bad, not great. Leaves me feeling indifferent.
Do you feel warm within your cage?

And have you figured out yet -


Life goes by?
Quote by Hydra150
There's a dick on Earth, too
It's you
#3
Explain please.
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#4
It's kinda cliche, honestly. Like I said, it's not bad, but I just feel like it's been said a hundred times in similar ways.
Do you feel warm within your cage?

And have you figured out yet -


Life goes by?
Quote by Hydra150
There's a dick on Earth, too
It's you
#5
Well do u know what it means???
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BOSS DD-3

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#6
Look man you asked for a crit and I gave you one. Do whatever you want with it.
Do you feel warm within your cage?

And have you figured out yet -


Life goes by?
Quote by Hydra150
There's a dick on Earth, too
It's you
#7
There's no meaning behind this song at all, its how YOU feel, that's what its about. I know AiC and im prety sure other bands have said it, but its true.
Gear:
Squier Affinity Series Stratocaster
Epiphone G-400
Line 6 Spider
Dunlop Crybaby Wah
BOSS DD-3

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Guitars- G&L, Gibson, PRS
Amps- Egnater, Bogner
Effects- Fulltone, JHS, Eventide
#8
Quote by CGB89
There's no meaning behind this song at all, its how YOU feel, that's what its about. I know AiC and im prety sure other bands have said it, but its true.

How's it true if it's dependant upon each person's individual perspective? That would make it subjective, and as such, NOT true.

Probably, it leaves people feeling indifferent becuase you didn't put anything behind it so that it would "mean nothing but how YOU feel."
Do you feel warm within your cage?

And have you figured out yet -


Life goes by?
Quote by Hydra150
There's a dick on Earth, too
It's you
#9
And on a personal note, I don't feel like any of that.

Just a thought.
Do you feel warm within your cage?

And have you figured out yet -


Life goes by?
Quote by Hydra150
There's a dick on Earth, too
It's you
#10
Yes, it does sound like something Cantrell would write, but guess what? I dig it. I can hear it sung in an AIC doom-ish style.
Just add "a" before bone.

In my world, the color RED doesn't exist.

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