this is something i just put together. i dont normally do this, but i figure i could get a second opinion. honestly, i dont believe in setting up songs in the verse, chorus, verse, etc. format. so these are just some lyrics for you to critique. thanks.

woke in the morning seein the fires of flames
i must be the angel who lost his own wings
can't make a reason that i've come to this place
l've lost control of a thing called fate

who could tell
the boy is lost he's droppin pennies in wells
he is alive and he could forget
that his past is gone with the wishes he casts

i call up high and say "this is me
who reached up so high to grab the hopes and dreams"
back to where i started a redundant thing
move on forward oh so carefully