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I wrote this song for my band a couple of days ago but would like some feedback on it thats all is it allright is basically what i'm trying to say. It's also the first song i've written.

Voices in my Head
Sometimes at night I’m
Awoken from my sleep
I keep hearin voices
Voices in my dream

I tell them to leave
Follow that narrow line
Go away forever
Leave my state of mind

Yeah, I’m hearin these voices
Their talkin out loud
I’m still hearin these voices
When you’re not around

Nights drift onwards
And I hear nothing
Then all of a sudden
They hit me up for something

Yeah, I’m hearin these voices
Their talkin out loud
I’m still hearin these voices
When you’re not around

Suddenly you enter through
My front door
Like a dream their
No longer asking for more

Sometimes at night as we
Both laid together
These voices I was hearin
We’re now gone forever

Yeah, I’m hearin these voices
Their talkin out loud
I’m still hearin these voices
When you’re not around
I’m still hearin these voices
When you’re not around