#1
I was originally going to cut this down but in the end I just went with the whole thing. This is just a jam that goes back and forth between two keys in a jazz inspired realm and was/is not intended to be a song song with themes and a verse chorus verse type thing so please just take it as it is. Let me know what you think!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qUm34Rr3CeM&fmt=18

Cheers,
J
#2
I didn't lisnt to the entire thing, there are some nice licks in there 00:42 -> 00:47 is a great example.
With those jamming skills, you should try working on a full fledched song!

crit mine plz