#1
I decided to do a little experimenting. There are a few major bugs (or at least one that comes to mind) with harmonization, or my lack of it, hehe. ..Seriously, if anyone can help me with it (hint, I'm trying to follow off the low melody in bar 21), I'd really appreciate any help.

But, I'm curious to know what you all think, good and bad. And, as always, I'm more than happy for a little c4c action.

Edit >> Thank you, JackyJW83
Attachments:
And She Loved A Giraffe.zip
And She Loved A Giraffe - ZackyJW83 fix.zip
Last edited by piquet at Nov 12, 2008,
#2
In one bar where its something like
e|-17-15-13
b|-10-8-7--

I think it makes more sense if the 13 is a 14
meh
#3
Good Chords, exotics
I've founded a little elp and punk influence, but i think it's only my opinion
Work more on the tremolo picking solo
and fix the error founded by zacky
Good but a little boring
Good experiment

7.8/10

Crit this please^^
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=995278
R.I.P.
Chuck Schuldiner 1967-2001
Ronnie James Padavona 1942-2010
Darrell Lance Abbott 1966-2004
Jon Nödtveidt 1975-2006
Per Yngve Ohlin 1969-1991
Øystein Aarseth 1968-1993
Joe Ptaceck 1973-2010
Ace Börje Thomas Forsberg 1966-2004
Last edited by Simon Blackwing at Nov 12, 2008,
#4
Zacky, you were right about that. I'm a little ashamed of my theory knowledge, or lack of it, sometimes. But still, thank you.

Simon, what is elp?
#5
elp=emerson, lake and palmer: an art-progressive rock group^^

PS= theory helps, but heart is better^^
R.I.P.
Chuck Schuldiner 1967-2001
Ronnie James Padavona 1942-2010
Darrell Lance Abbott 1966-2004
Jon Nödtveidt 1975-2006
Per Yngve Ohlin 1969-1991
Øystein Aarseth 1968-1993
Joe Ptaceck 1973-2010
Ace Börje Thomas Forsberg 1966-2004
Last edited by Simon Blackwing at Nov 12, 2008,