#1
And why do we
give ourselves
and why can’t we see
through these midnight elves
and i don’t get
these fucking pictures just quite yet
and i will find
the answers to these riddles left on the floor

but if i
can’t solve this
will you take me in
apprentice me and my sins

and honestly
you people just
don’t know where you are going
along your tracks
but i can’t speak
‘cause i’m the same i’m just as fowl
but at least i can admit it when i fall

but if i
can’t solve this
will you take me in
apprentice me and my sins

and we’ll all be
dead by moonrise
a great army
led by a man who cheats on his wife
but these lines we’ve drawn
these paths we’ve made
and canvas we’ve wasted on such terrible paintings

but if i
can’t solve this
will you take me in
apprentice me and my sins


i'll post the link to the song, if requested, so you can hear how it flows better...
Last edited by triggerhappy19 at Nov 15, 2008,
#5
tip, how to bypass wordfilters, especially useful on the S&L forum, where language and word choice can really make or break a piece.


to say f uck, as an example.

type in
fuck

without the spaces.
so you get, fuck.

click quote if you still dont understand
#7
Midnight elves? Seemed a wee bit forced, but doable, considering the music I listen to...
I liked it all in all. Reminds me a bit of the Decemberists with the voice and content.