#1
Wow, it's been a while

This is a song we play in our band and I kind of like it...

Tell me what you think of it, maybe give suggestions for improvement.

C4C

grtz!
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#2
Wow, for the genre its really good. I really like the intro and the jazzy breakdown how the dissonance gives it a shivery feel. I also liked the immediate plunge into chaos after the jazzy part with the triplet riff, really good.
However, I really wasn't that fond of the fast picking riffs at the beginning, perhpas they sound better when played in real life but it just wasn't working for me.

All in all, not a bad job and certainly an improvement from your last song 8/10

Care to crit if you get the time? I know its not much the same genre but any comment would be nice - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=995871