You're are going far below the range of a Cello whilst using a Cello sample. I suggest changing to a Double Bass sample or altering the part. First, it is classically incorrect and second it gets too muddy.

Surreal. Interesting. Whispers are well done and eerie.

Vocals aren't very concise. I don't think I understand a single word.

That's all I got.

Cool song.

If you are interested, the songs in my profile could use some crits, preferably the instrumentals.

ah i was actually playing the cello and i didn't have a bass player so, i just threw on some effect to move it down an octave. but thanks, yeah i'll crit another