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thats pretty good man ive been writing songs for three years and have over seven hundred done go look up stolen alive on myspace and read the blog it is my favorite songs maybe sometime we could get together online and write one keep going man its pretty good
I am a punk styled guitarist and singer looking to start a band in Bismarck North Dakota please reply if you are a drummer bassist or guitarist in the area
no paste them here i will pm you your place in the contest
okay when i have block i think of one random object preferably one i know about and think of a problem with it and brainstorm ideas from there keep track of cool lines you think of and tye them all together when you think you have enough
the above was en example not an entry
(verse1) Cut my wrists
bleed on the canvas
from the heart
this piece of art is broken
taking it all
to take a fall
down the stairs
to nowhere but an empty psalm

(Chorus)Take my breath away
You can't ignore the misery
Take my breath away
You can't ignore what's become of me

(verse 2)Burn the page
Because its blank
And holds no words
It needs to be burnt and then hanged
Treat the rich
Punish the wretch
like flawed society
follow the scene and take it back

(Breakdown)The misery is what's become of me
It's still hard to see what's become of me
Here are the rules
-must have at least 2 verses and chorus can add any bridges or intros
-must be able to fit metal or grunge or emo no rainbow pony songs here
-no politics
-I will pm the winner and crown them winner of this contest
-good luck
contact me if you want to hear more i can send any song you would like me to write

heres one
VENDETTA
(intro)i hold these words
they're my oath
they're my oath
I WILL KILL YOU

(Verse 1)Does it feel good
having your skull bashed in
does it kill you
having blades under your skin
and i should have known
I couldn't trust you
and I should have known
I couldn't .................YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH

(Chorus)Lets hear it for vendettas
Cheer for the bloody knife
Lets hear it for vendettas
I vow to take your life

(Verse 2)Does it feel good
being cut open
does it kill you
being beaten
and I should have known
I couldn't trust you
and i should have known
I couldn't......................YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH
okay im not emo but after the first verse winds upon itself in a giant metaphor it basically sais we paint our pasts with blood
I am looking to write lyrics for either a metal band or a punk band heres is one i wrote but i just want a band to perform it if you loike it i can send you anything you would like me to write PS this is copywrited but i will gladly let a good band use it
Breath
(verse1) Cut my wrists
bleed on the canvas
from the heart
this piece of art is broken
taking it all
to take a fall
down the stairs
to nowhere but an empty psalm

(Chorus)Take my breath away
You can't ignore the misery
Take my breath away
You can't ignore what's become of me

(verse 2)Burn the page
Because its blank
And holds no words
It needs to be burnt and then hanged
Treat the rich
Punish the wretch
like flawed society
follow the scene and take it back

(Breakdown)The misery is what's become of me
It's still hard to see what's become of me
I have been writing lyrics since 5th grade and have been published by the american library of poetry. I specialize in everything from deathcore to punk to grunge so contact me if you are interested i look forward to working together
Was I the only one who didnt look forward to Death Magnetic. After St. Anger I lost faith in them. But Death Magnetic helped restore my faith. Just two gripes about it
1. Whatever happend to Hetfield's growling voice
2. More originality on guitar people