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you might want to check the rules man cause they dont let this stuff slide much here in this forum
moments of happiness are rare
drifiting away in a blank stare
like believing in a god that isnt there
moments of happiness are rare
drifiting away in a blank stare
like believing in a god that isnt there

hollow mind lost in space
wake up, dont be a f***ing waste
tragic endings make this place

the demons dont live here anymore
because you woke me up off the floor
never again to open the door

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this was kinda a way i put into prospective of how my life was change by my wife.
this was before i met her and then after she came into my life.
(just for a bit of background)

cliche?
to many rhymes?
its dark i like the jungle out there , i swear
the same pain i feel at times
"Pain I feel, not easily revealed"
"crying inside, but outside is still"
"heartbroken, with only sleep to deal"
"this pain makes me all to real"

"pain consumes me, with feelings of hate"
"while i lie in bed, i can see my fate"
"only god can judge me, but i feel its to late"
"I wish i could destroy, this person i have made"


what do you think

too many rhymes ????
Quote by wardyh
its F major
Am, C, Em and D all work really well with these chords. kind of a gentle soft guns n roses ballad kind of progression, works nice and awesome to put a solo with



thanks man
im a bit lacking in the chord department
i have a decent verse lign up its only 2 chords mind you but its a good sound to me - but im having trouble getting to a chorus - can any one help break my block????????????????????????????

here are the two chords im using for the verse - (this is only meant to be a nice song for my wife)

e 0 3
b 1 3
g 2 0
d 3 0
a 3 2
e X 3
play 7 times then switch to Gsus7

not sure what the first chord is just picked it out one day

thanks for any help