Just a couple of comments before I review your song. Perhaps you mistakingly came up with a better lyric than I did. My song lyric was actually, "Eternity is a long time". The lead synth in my tune was a Korg TR-Rack (circa 1999), with a built in wah-wah effect that I activated with the keyboard joystick. Good thing you showed up yesterday, things have been mighty quiet on this forum lately. OK, now your tune: I read the lyrics before I listened to the song. Pretty heavy my friend. The lyrics seemed kind of depressing, but when I actually heard the song, there was way more of a feeling of humor than I anticipated, even though I'm very familiar with your music. What is kind of funny (in a good way), is the instrumental is upbeat and happy, compared to the subject matter of the lyrics. It is an interesting contrast, kind of like CCR's song "Bad Moon Rising" (happy instrumental with pessimistic lyrics). Anyway, the song ended up more amusing and entertaining than I anticipated. Instrumentally everything sounds good. The lungfruit vocal style adds an element of humor. Since I am spiritually inclined, I had a hard time not fixating on your lyric "And I don't care much about the heaven's above". Perhaps that's how you really feel, or perhaps it is something you didn't seriously mean. If it is a topic you want to discuss (since eternity is a long time), send me a private message. Cheers!