Good Acoustic sound and playing. like the added separately panned guitars in the second verse. Interesting Flanged acoustic solo part. I see your using Fruity Loops drums, I also use that and one tip I can give you is open up FPC, and start panning your drums to different parts than just center, trust me, it makes it sound better. Also try out the different drumkits they have on FPC. Anyways, Overall, it was a good song. I'm sorry for getting back to you late, thanks for the crit.
Cool intro, bit lengthy, but good. Nice guitar playing. Your voice reminds me of Lou Reed. I like the implementation of dynamics throughout, but during a couple of the louder parts i'm pretty sure the acoustic was clipping, and it drowns out the electric. overall it was pretty good, the song was catchy, and I enjoyed it, you just need to step up your vocals a bit, and work on mixing. Sorry for getting back to you late, thank you for your crit.
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