This is my second song I have ever written. I don't think I am very good at all, but I would like to know what I can do to improve and to make it sound better. Also, don't just tell me how much I suck but help me improve.
verse 1 Wake up and open your eyes Its triggered, time to use your lies open your window, let the smoke escape stop time, and get it on tape
let your mind free let it fly away take me to that place there's only one way
Your sleepless with sleep you don't know who to be you're your own thing just lacking some sting your the rebel without a cause faker than studio applause
Just try to help me out anyway. Like for expample now that I have read it for a second time, the rhyming pattern kind of sounds lame, so can anyone help me out?
i have a ? about this. I saw a picture of SVR? i think and some other dude playing a double neck.. one was playing the bottom one and one was playing the 12-string. Is this possible?? I mean only one of them would work right?
I don't know exactly what SG I have been playing alot lately (not mine) but I think it's a SG ultimate or supreme... something like that I think. well, Wow. 2nd best guitar I've played. Go for itt. Even if u have to save up alot of money.
if you don't plan on getting serious with the guitar and you have the money.. thne y not?? But if I were you I would buy an $200 dollar ibanez instead. They're so much better than any guitar at that price.
I just decided that I will get a Agile AL-3500 and i will then change the pick-ups to suit my style.
Bridge- I want a Slash sound. A bluesy when clean, but when used with gain I want a Overdriven sound. It would be cool if I had a distored but not muddy sound.
Neck- I want the best cleans I can find. Something really bluesy and when distorted something that sounds like John Frusciante. Just basically, a John Frusciante sound pick-up. (i kno he uses single coils but I want a sound close to that) Mayb a fitted P-90?
Also does anyone know how much a shop charges to change pickups??