Found 39 results
Found 39 results
Yeah, I thought that, too. Just let the bass be a bit louder in the mix (fortissimo instead of forte) and maybe add more to it than what you have now.i thought it would be a good idea to introduce a stronger bass line imo.
Do you care to elaborate? Tell me what's wrong at least.
yeah i dont like that part either. i think im going to try a few different things there...i think it changes the mood too fast =/I feel that this part doesn't work all that well in going into the heavy part.
it lets you judge the emotion of the song a lot better.
wow, you obviously got it perfectlyjust listen, entranced
sorry man, I phrased that way wrong. I meant that it was too long as in way too repetitive like gonzaw said. I was getting really bored of the same stuff over and over again with little variation.
don't get me wrong, it was a good song, but just not enough to keep it interesting.
and I forgot a couple? I know I listened to all of them. I guess I just forgot to crit your guys'. they'll be up in a second.
Just to make one clarification, I took points off here cause this song was just way too long man. And I can’t give you an awesome score because of that.
what's that? xDreminds me of Days Of The New
ah, ok, nice! i always thought the bass was not that good in that part of the song...good to hear you think it fits!The bass fits really well here
personally, i like constant drum patterns for every part of a song, but i can see what you mean. i tend to write rather similar drums...i will definately try out some other things!Perhaps you could mix up the drums a bit sometimes? Like, do a fill and lock it in with the bass.
i needed a transition from G to B, and that's my result xD as i said above, my transitions are rather bad...but i don't know how to improve that =/I don't particularly like the chord that the guitar comes in with after a while.
could you please exlain that? i don't know which part of the intro you mean...weird pauses that kind of disrupt the flow that's trying to form